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Evolution


Lived in fences so far

with cherished times, days,

Yes, memories too.


Lived being encircled

within bricks, walls, on paths,

Yes, derogatory too.


Forbearance stormed 

to live with a choice

Yes, the desire too.


To live, fly, flow and wave-like water,

to shine and dazzle like a diamond amidst the coal

Yes, certainly accomplished too.


@Noor

1/7/22

late post though.

I feel some poetry must contain raw substance,

otherwise, how it gonna achieve the ripeness, 

"Indeed emotions are convenient often intolerable."  


Do share your experience of writing stuff later u found it raw.

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